The Tennessee River curled through the valley like a dark ribbon, its surface holding the faint shimmer of late October light. Morning mist rose from the water and moved slowly up the slopes. Along the banks, exposed stone darkened beneath the damp.
The trees on the hillsides had already surrendered half their leaves. Dull ochre and bruised copper remained among the bare branches, with occasional traces of red. Fallen leaves gathered in the hollows and along the narrow roads climbing from the river.
From the western rise, Hollow Hill stood above the valley, broad and stern on its stone plateau. The manor had been built to command the elevation rather than accommodate it. Retaining walls descended into the slope beneath terraces gone brown for autumn, while chimneys and turrets broke the roofline above, their stone softened by years of wind, rain, and lichen.
The front of the house faced the river. Tall windows watched the water from between heavy courses of stone, while the outer walls guarded the grounds behind them.
Nothing about the manor appeared abandoned. It seemed instead to be keeping its place, holding the hill as it had for generations and watching the valley change below.
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Samuel Price worked at the wrought-iron gate with steady, practiced movements. His body had long ago memorized the work and left his mind free for other things.
The bars stood tall and narrow, each finial sharpened to a point. At their center, the initials HH curled through the ironwork. Samuel polished the metal until the letters caught the pale morning like black glass.
Most believed they belonged to Howard Hale, the man who had built Hollow Hill and spent his life defending it from the world.
Samuel knew better.
He rested his hand against the gate for a moment, then moved on.
Firewood needed covering before the night frost returned. Leaves had gathered at the base of the stone steps, and he raked them into crisp piles. In the garden beds, the soil still held a trace of autumn warmth beneath flowers bowed into brittle stalks.
Samuel knelt and cleared them carefully, leaving the roots undisturbed.
“Right roots,” he said quietly. “Right soil.”
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By midafternoon, the shadows stretched long across the yard. A wind had risen from the river, carrying cold water and damp leaves through the bare branches. Samuel secured the last shutter and started the long walk toward the gate.
Metal glinted through the trees.
Headlights appeared on the one-lane curve below. A dark sedan emerged at the foot of the drive, tires grinding over gravel before the engine quieted and the car stopped outside the gate.
Samuel waited.
Through the windshield he saw the man behind the wheel. His jaw was set. His hands remained on the steering wheel after the engine stopped, as though he needed another moment before allowing anyone to see him.
Michael Hale. The eldest son.
A day early.
Samuel unlatched the chain and swung the gate wide. The iron groaned under its own weight. At the center, the HH split apart.
Michael drove through without lowering the window. His eyes remained fixed on the house above.
Samuel watched the sedan climb. Then he closed the gate behind it.
Whatever trouble was coming to Hollow Hill that week had just come through wearing a good coat.
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Very good!
Good is often how it begins.
We’ll see where it leads…
Very good start.
Please tell me the name of this novel
Helen Rumbles
You are reading The Pact of Hollow Hill. I know you will enjoy it.
Awesome beginning.
Interesting beginning. Yes, I want more.
Hmmmm……🧐🧐🧐
Can’t wait to continue reading..
I cant wait to read the rest of this book
I’m glad Hollow Hill found you. There’s much more ahead.
Yes
Sounds like it would be an interesting read
There’s more waiting beyond the river valley.
Sounds like a good read
Thank you. There’s more waiting within the river valley.
Can’t wait to start reading
Looks like a good read
Can’t wait to start reading
So far the detail is enough so I can picture thing but not too much to take away my imagination. Im still curious enough to continue reading.